For most of the twentieth century, cities were planned around the assumption that movement was a cost to be minimised. Streets were widened, functions were separated, and distance was treated as a problem that engineering would eventually solve. What that approach overlooked is that a street is not only a channel; it is also a place where people meet without having arranged to.
zài èr shí shì jì de dà bù fèn shí jiān lǐ ， chéng shì guī huà de qián tí shì ： chū xíng shì yī zhǒng yīng dāng jǐn liàng jiǎn shǎo de chéng běn 。 yú shì dào lù bèi tuò kuān ， gōng néng bèi fēn kāi ， jù lí bèi dàng zuò yí gè zhōng jiāng yóu gōng chéng shǒu duàn jiě jué de wèn tí 。 zhè zhǒng sī lù hū lüè de shì ， jiē dào bù zhǐ shì tōng dào ， tā tóng shí yě shì rén men bìng wèi shì xiān yuē dìng què huì xiāng yù de dì fāng 。
สิ่งที่ผู้ตรวจพิจารณา
保留了原文的逻辑层次
"movement was a cost" 的转译准确
最后一句的转折没有丢失
中文表达自然，不是逐词直译
ตัวอย่างที่ 2
The most useful thing a reviewer can do is not to say whether they liked the work, but to describe precisely what happened to them while they were reading it. Judgement can be argued with; an accurate account of an experience cannot.
píng lùn zhě néng zuò de zuì yǒu yòng de shì ， bú shì shuō zì jǐ xǐ bù xǐ huān zhè bù zuò pǐn ， ér shì zhǔn què dì miáo shù yuè dú guò chéng zhōng zì jǐ shēn shàng fā shēng le shén me 。 pàn duàn shì kě yǐ zhēng lùn de ， ér duì yī duàn tǐ yàn de rú shí jì shù zé wú fǎ zhēng lùn 。
สิ่งที่ผู้ตรวจพิจารณา
对比结构清楚
"argued with" 译得准确
第二句的对照关系保留
中文流畅
ตัวอย่างที่ 3
Many people believe that learning a language is mainly about memorising words. In fact, words only become useful when we know how they are used together. A learner who knows three thousand words but cannot put them into natural sentences will still struggle to be understood. That is why reading widely matters as much as studying lists.